My Story

one time i went in a battle of my own mine i battle people with a sword and shield put not knowing i was in coma and so was my love cressilana we went on trying to defeat a dark queen who would summon stuff such as ogres and stuff but i battled here over and over


It was a pretty day when I saw her the love of my life... I went to talk to her just staggering as always when a coin a magic coin fell on me and her we were knock out only to wake up in a different world then was handed a sword and shield and was told you are the hero... I freak out and ran only to see her the dark queen. That's the first part its not real i never did this stuff.... ill bring my book tomorrow and put it up on here it'll take forever to complete it... [lol]

she quickly stuck out her arm only for me to smash into her arm she drug me and drug me when i open my eyes i was saved by cressillina she asked me why did i run you know we both have been wanting adventure suddenly i passed out and woke back up in the village *BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM*suddenly a oger broke in to the village i saw a gaurd sent flying through the air a other one be slide through the dirt i paused for a few moments then grabbed my sword and jumped and striked the oger in the head but only for it to bounce off and be throw into a building and i got up and hit its side and it quickly fell down i kept doing it till he was dead. theres part two of day one tell me if you like it

Then suddenly a girl came in looking like a tree I grabbed my sword and swung and my sword got caught in the bark of her face i pulled and pulled and again cressilina swings and knocks mine out but gets hers stuck i grab a torch and burn her face she comes her senses and sees me.

******That's the end of part 3 day 1*****

Pretty good story.

im not finish yet i have a book at home im writing

okay story...your spelling is sloppy though :\

lol but still not finished

lol Yeah fix the spelling and your Good to go. ;D

idk how

Haven't you learned english at school... o-o

It could use some improvements.

i forgot my book that aint the hole story

Ohhh well it must get better then. troll

ik ill get it tomarrow

Needs more spelling and grammar improvements.

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lol whats with the face

ik it does im not good at spelling

(Type it in Microsoft Word, then spellcheck.)

id have that

You have Microsoft Word.. o.O

no i dont my school computer dont have writing assinmments

Ahh then okay. o-o All computers come with wordpad though. Whta OS does your pc have o-o

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i dont have it it aint a laptop i dont think lol 0-0

James f.y.i., when adding to a your story, continue it on the first post.

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Thanks, and good story so far.